Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new house.
In your letter, you should:
_ say why you are free
_ how you can help
_ ask questions about new house.
Dear Andrew,
It’s been a long time since I last wrote letters to you. As I have heard from Jack, you are moving to a new house near the city centre next Tuesday so I writing this letter to give you a hand with the movement.
It is just nice that Tuesday is my weekly off day so Jack and I decided to make it to your house to help you and your family out as Jack also mentioned that nothing had been packed yet since you have been very busy these days with your company’s project. Also, your children are very young to help and your wife alone can’t handle everything.
We will come to your house in the morning to aid you with packaging of things and luggage and transfer some of them to the new house using our own cars. Not to worry, our cars, together with yours are surely enough to put everything in so you don’t have to hire a truck for them. Also, we will help you out with the arrangement of things in your new house so that things is done faster and you will have more time to rest for the next hardworking day.
However, for things to go smoothly, can you inform me the address the house and some descriptions of the exterior and interior views of it so that I will not take time searching for it on Google map while getting there.
I’m looking forward to your reply and seeing you on that day.
Yours sincerely,
Diana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...se near the city centre next Tuesday so I writing this letter to give you a hand ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37984496124 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20421350555 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3842818197 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308840317331 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14545553803 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477589518829 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181575073758 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694045433423 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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