Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new house.
In your letter, you should:
_ say why you are free
_ how you can help
_ ask questions about the new house
Dear Ankush,
Many congratulations to you and your family for shifting into your new apartment after living in a rental flat for almost 4 years. I was delighted to hear the news from your letter which I received yesterday.
Well, I was wondering to help you in shifting your furniture and other household items to your new home. I heard that you are shifting on Saturday and it is certainly a perfect day for me to volunteer in helping to shift your stuff. The reason I am free on Saturday is that I have a week off and it's quite boring to stay at home rather than visiting family and friends. Therefore, I thought to see and help you in moving your household stuff.
One of my friends is working with packers and movers company, I could call him and we could take his firm services. Plus, we will get a good discount and a priority service because of my personal connections with him. If you feel comfortable, give me a ring to call him and I will schedule an appointment with them.
Apart from this, Could you please share the WhatsApp GPS location to your new house along with the address. It would be convenient for me to come by my car by putting the destination into the Mobile GPS Device.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54112554113 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5245705119 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5666323353 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6923076923 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313462627165 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106954075263 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932071143979 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160902079943 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767582478172 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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