Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well in this post-Covid world. I am delighted to hear the news from your brother that you have bought a new house in the city. I do understand the feeling of paying an expensive price to buy a homeland in Delhi. Anyway, I am writing this letter to come to your place by helping you in moving your household stuff to your new place.
Your brother informed me that you guys are shifting on the coming Saturday. Fortunately, I came back to Delhi from Canada to spend two months' vacation, and it is quite boring to stay at home all day. Therefore, I thought to volunteer myself in shifting your staff only if you insist me to come at your new house on Saturday.
Apart from this, I can help in arranging for the packers and movers guys to shift furniture and other large household items. My cousin is working in a packers and movers company. He is the general manager of his firm. If you want me to call him, please let me know in advance. Plus, we will get a good discount from his company's services along with the professional staff of packers and movers. By any chance, if you haven't booked any of the packers and movers, I can make a booking just by calling my cousin.
Also, Could you please some extra details of your new house like address, society, and nearest famous place or mark point. I'll be coming in my car, so, please do not forget to send me the GPS location through WhatsApp. It would be more convenient and effortless to reach your place.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working Does this trend have advantages or disadvantages What do you think about work life balance 73
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Modern communications mean that it s no longer necessary to write letters To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your o 84
- Your town council has decided to demolish an historic building due to lack of funds to renovate Write a letter to your counsellor In your letter you should say how you got to know of this news why it is important to preserve the historic building how the 84
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou have bought a new house in the city. I do understand the feeling of paying an ...
^
Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ckers and movers. By any chance, if you havent booked any of the packers and movers, I...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...and nearest famous place or mark point. Ill be coming in my car, so, please do not ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4965034965 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33041367859 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0522474377 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6470588235 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338321333773 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959405525269 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109723172104 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185729370141 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998751860626 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.