Dear Susan,
Hope you and your family are all well. I am ecstatic to know that your are visiting Kuala Lumpur along with your family next month.
Firstly, I would tell you that Kuala Lumpur is a beautiful city for family vacation. Since i stayed there for two weeks during my vacations, i will suggest you some amazing places to visit during your stay. Make sure you visit the Petronas Tower, Menara KL Tower, Batu Cave and Sunway Lagoon Theme Park. Moreover, there are many shopping mall where you can find both local and international brands stores.
As I know you are a foodie person and you love to try different food. There a numerous food stalls available in the city. I will suggest you to try their most famous dish named as "Nasi Lemak". It was my favourite dish.
Lastly, for transportation, cab is the best option to avail in the city, bus and train services are expensive as well as you have to step out of city to get one. Other than that, do not forget to rid on "HOP ON - HOP OFF" Bus. It is a city tour bus specially for the tourist. You can explore the city bu riding on the bus.
Hope this will help you, have a great trip.
With Love,
Nakita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...autiful city for family vacation. Since i stayed there for two weeks during my va...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...here for two weeks during my vacations, i will suggest you some amazing places to...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'malls'?
Suggestion: malls
...Park. Moreover, there are many shopping mall where you can find both local and inter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50458715596 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28232863511 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6978969093 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.375 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171754946107 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533180310341 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381204440536 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911013327997 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378389258739 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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