You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is avilable in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of the bookstore.In your letter- Give details of the book- Say why you need this book- Tell how you will pay for it.

Submitted by saba2818 on Tue, 09/17/2019 - 06:06

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to purchase a self-improvement book, named as the 7 habits of highly effective people written by Stephen R. Covey which is available at your store.

The book is about how to improve your skill. It was first published in 1989. One of my friend recommended this book to me so i was going through your website and came to know that it is available at your store. It is white in colour with blue text on it.

As an HR Manger, you always try to improve your self and this book is all about how to improve your personality. These type of book always bring positivist in one life.

As I am working person i cannot go to bank in my office hours, I can transfer the cash in your account. Kindly provide me which the details of your account on my mailing id abc@xyz.com.

I look forward to your timely response.

Your Faithfully,
Saba Khan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y effective people written by Stephen R. Covey which is available at your store. ...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y friend recommended this book to me so i was going through your website and came...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: white
...at it is available at your store. It is white in colour with blue text on it. As an HR Mang...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ok always bring positivist in one life. As I am working person i cannot go to ba...
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Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n one life. As I am working person i cannot go to bank in my office hours, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47239263804 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58481044954 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625766871166 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2300456787 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.75 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221114396544 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705217415731 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617232746061 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109512441077 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661888267227 0.0580467560999 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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