Dear Selin,
I am delighted to hear that you will be able to visit Istanbul and stay with me. I am writing to let you know that I cannot be at home when you arrive but I did all arrangements so that you will have rest until I turn back.
I will leave keys my neighbour who lives at fifth floor. I wrote her telephone number to you if you cannot reach her, you will be able to phone her. She is an old lady and will be happy to help you if you need anything else when you are here.
I would be grateful if you could water my plants at balcony since I will have been in New York for a week. Please be sure that all of them get enough water.
My flight is at 4 p.m, and thus I will have been home until 8 p.m. I will prepare curry chicken and fried rice which are your favourite meals. After dinner, we will watch the latest action movie and drink tasty wine which I purchased last year in Roma. If you have any other suggestions, plase let me know.
Hope to see you soon.
Best wishes
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou will have rest until I turn back. I will leave keys my neighbour who lives ...
^
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my neighbour who lives at fifth floor. I wrote her telephone number to you if yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.00497512438 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92698583905 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636815920398 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2281686826 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119055403416 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047672984339 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338786256838 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724766480527 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336786632718 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.62 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.92 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.