Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your apartment while you are gone.
Tell him where the keys are.
Tell him to take care of one thing while while you are away.
Tell him what to do on the way of your arrival.
Dear Sisi,
Hope this letter finds you well. Yes of course, you can stay at my apartment during my absence and you can get the keys from my next-door neighbor. You may need to visit him in the evening since he is working at a shop during day time.
You can use my visitor’s room which you stayed during the last visit. Furthermore, you may need to turn on the main electrical switch since I normally switch it off when I go out for a long period. Additionally, can you please put your litter and garbage into a garbage bag which you can find the near the kitchen door? Please keep the bag in the corridor that will be taken away by the apartment cleaning staff. They normally come around 9 in the morning.
Can you please arrange a taxi for me on my arrival to pick me up at the airport? I will be coming on 29 June and the flight will land at 10 am.
Best wishes,
Jonathan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26470588235 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3076898678 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2981973757 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9090909091 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146897403927 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527365269622 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420462233699 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967868928947 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523144986154 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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