Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your home town. He needs information and guidance about the town.
- say best time to visit your town
- explain places to visit in your cities
- invite him to your home
Dear Richie,
How are you? I heard you'll be visiting Abeokuta, my home town, very soon. I'm writing this letter to give you all the vital information you need about the town and to give you guidance about some places to visit while here.
The best time to visit the city is during the Christmas period. It's a time when everyone staying out of town comes around to spend time with their parents. It's also when the annual fish festival takes place, which I'm sure you will enjoy with your family.
Also, we have beautiful places you can visit with your family. There are monumental gardens, fun parks and recreational centers. The most interesting park I'll love you to see is the Olumo rock, which is a historical park with various trees and rocks to sight. I'm certain you will learn one or two things from there.
Lastly, I'll love to invite you to my home, it's been long I saw you. We need to gist and relish on the good old days.
Kindly let me know if these little pieces of information will be useful to you. I look forward to seeing you.
Your friend,
Bimbola.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
Dear Richie, How are you? I heard youll be visiting Abeokuta, my home town, ver...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ting Abeokuta, my home town, very soon. Im writing this letter to give you all the...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to give you guidance about some places to visit while here. The best time to...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...he city is during the Christmas period. Its a time when everyone staying out of tow...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
...eriod. Its a time when everyone staying out of town comes around to spend time with their p...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...round to spend time with their parents. Its also when the annual fish festival tak...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd to spend time with their parents. Its also when the annual fish festival takes...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...annual fish festival takes place, which Im sure you will enjoy with your family. ...
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Suggestion: I'm
... with various trees and rocks to sight. Im certain you will learn one or two thing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50253807107 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09108716231 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3714351687 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1333333333 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1333333333 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268473309972 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913094435304 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964364491876 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120800875529 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858899322714 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.93 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.