Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain:
1. Why you are selling the television
2. Describe the television
3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Baljeet,
I hope you and your family are in good health and spirit. It’s been a long time since we met. I just thought I’d write to let you know that I am selling my old television as I bought a new Samsung(52 inches, full HD) tv recently. As I remember the last time we met, you were looking for an old TV online. I would like to offer you mine since it’s in a very good condition and fits your requirements.
My old television is just 3 years old and has never got any complaint. It’s a 32-inch Sony LCD screen with blue-tooth and HDMI connectivity. It is under the company's warranty that covers 10 years after purchase. All the bills are a warranty card is with us. The TV has a good sound quality and also has a USB port.
If you are still searching for one and my television fits your requirements, you can see it anytime by next weekend. The price can be discussed once you like it.
waiting for your reply.
Bhawna Sharma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-13 | Bhawna Sharma | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (LCD) must be used with a third-person verb: 'screens'.
Suggestion: screens
...complaint. It's a 32-inch Sony LCD screen with blue-tooth and HDMI connectivity. ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Waiting
...ice can be discussed once you like it. waiting for your reply. Bhawna Sharma
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40223463687 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54226162316 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1077400162 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6153846154 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163075250794 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541569642061 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658140374022 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118478752794 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706892498434 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.