Dear Manager,
I would like to bring to your notice, a glitch which occured on my computer system since yesterday, which is a part of recruitment team of this office. Issue occurs after continuous working for 30 to 40 minutes. System keeps rebooting itself.
I have tried to refresh it numerous times and also cleared catche. I have also deleted many unwanted files and deleted the browsing history too but all of no use. Moreover, the system keeps on heating even after a 15 minutes of work which is creating intense inconvenience in my work.
I have tried contacting our IT team via calls and mails, which I have added cc to you. Nobody yet reverted me on this matter.
As a part of recruitment team I need to get in touch with applicants frequently, this glitch hindering my work consistency a lot. I humbly request you to please send someone to fix this issue as soon as possible so that I can resume my work effectively.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
CHHAVI ARORA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'teams'?
Suggestion: teams
...work. I have tried contacting our IT team via calls and mails, which I have added...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69942196532 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62309310954 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9229911872 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9090909091 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151772985569 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557646384786 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341850874326 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774839365179 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150427375771 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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