Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it

I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards a computer system problem I am facing these days.
As you are aware about the use of internet in our profession, the Wi-Fi of my computer system is not working properly from this morning. I tried trouble-shooting the issue on my behalf. However, no error was displayed. I tried restarting the PC and resuming further in spite of the same message. Repeated the respective many times but failed
The processing and speed of my computer has also been effected by this behavior of the monitor. Resulting, debugging takes more than usual time. My submission is on hold because of this. I need to re-correct the project before submission and there are a few days left for my submission. I request you to debug the problem and extend my submission date till next week, this will be helpful for me to complete my project with a proper peace of mind.
Looking forward hearing from you.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m this morning. I tried trouble-shooting the issue on my behalf. However, no erro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70731707317 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69396288949 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676829268293 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.972902769 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1818181818 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170744392179 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510809699356 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720485390694 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106376050219 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706516153988 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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