Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am X, working as an executive. I have been living in PC society for five years. Through this letter, I would like to request you to open an English language center in our area for both young and aged groups.
English is an international language so it is the first way to communicate with everyone internationally. The English training center will be continuing six days a week and will be only closed on Friday. The center will run from 6 pm to 10 pm with different batches. The English language center will provide various facilities for different age groups, especially for the aged people. The training center will offer a 60% discount and lifetime membership to encourage them to attend this course.
In my locality, most of the people are retired person. They normally pass their boring time at home. That is why the productivity of their brain decreases. They face difficulty to communicate with young people. For these reasons, the old people feel to get guidance on English language training.
Therefore, keeping the needs of aged people in mind, I urge you to set up an English language club in our area on an urgent basis.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
X
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82938388626 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7041642353 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9629853664 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6875 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1875 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0616468498998 0.216113520407 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256468567363 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397952133188 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0345786067174 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234623566698 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.