Dear X,
I hope you are doing well. You know I am working as HR executive in Motor private Limited. I am writing this letter to let you know about a very important matter relating to switching my job.
You know, I have been serving at this organization for the last four years as an executive. I am always trying to give my level best and satisfy my supervisor. Last year, the boss was satisfied with my performance but the management was not providing a good appraisal. Therefore, this year appraisal committee will not change their unfair decisions.
Furthermore, the organization is far from my residence which is why I am facing difficulty reaching the office. In these circumstances, every day I change two vehicles to reach the office which is very hazardous for me and almost consumes four hours every day.
For these reasons, I want to change my job and seek for higher position job like senior executive or assistant manager in the human resource department. You have a lot of good communication in a different company in various positions. I hope in this regard you would help me in the future.
Hopefully, soon I will get a positive response from you.
Your truly
Y
- You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year and you need a place to live in You have decided to write to an agency about accommodation Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation In your letter say why you are going 50
- Suppose you wish to cancel your flight but it is not possible because the year port authority issues tickets Write a letter to the ticket manager In your letter mention Your identity destination flight number Date of purchase Why do you want to cancel 73
- You stayed at a hotel last week After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind Write a letter to the hotel manager and explain what happened Describe the watch and ask them to help you find it 73
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 73
- write a letter to your authority to open an English language center in your area
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ositive response from you. Your truly Y
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7922705314 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83580228575 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6677201707 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236868912386 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803653570837 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629755218326 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118962242112 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080353030614 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.