Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation In your letter describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where shoul

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Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:

describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
You do NOT need to write any address.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am John dwellers of Huston Street Texas U.S.A, penning down this epistle to seek your constent to deliver a presentation on Corona-virus-19. As i attended a medical conference last Saturday at Apollo Hospital in Delhi, so I have prepared a presentation to get rid of this invasive burgeoning epidemic.

Even though supremacy has embarked a lot of awareness campaigns, this presentation would depict the causes, precautions and treatments of this chronic ailments in lucid way. I have tried my best to make this presentation quite exhaustive and easy to understand for people of diverse backgrounds.

I cogitate that every person of your organisation should attend this seminar, so that they can protect themselves as well as their beloved ones. It would be highly appreciable if you motivate your work force to participate in this presentation at Lions Club on Monday at 10:a.m.

I am anticipating your prompt reply on above cited subject matter.

Yours Sincerely,
John.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27329192547 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11975650907 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72049689441 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8103244778 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21606625156 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098792833831 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354468781822 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116667338336 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408804063422 0.0580467560999 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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