Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award.
Who is this person
Why did you choose him?
What is the characteristic of a good employee?
Dear Sir,
I am sadhana from the networking department of our company.I am writing this letter to draw to your attention an extraordinary colleague for the award of the best employee of the year 2019.Her name is ritu and she is the head of the networking department of our company from the last three years.
I choose to nominate ritu because I have been associated with her for the last two years, and I have found her to be very hardworking.I get regular feedback from our customers about network support. No one has ever complained about the our network support system and our team just because of ritu.
ritu fulfills all the requirement of good employee .she has a good sence of humar.she is cooperative with all her collegues.she has ability to work under pressure and she is the best team leader.
I request you consider my suggestion for considering ritu for the best employee award.
Yours faithfully,
Sadhana
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...pport. No one has ever complained about the our network support system and our team jus...
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...tem and our team just because of ritu. ritu fulfills all the requirement of goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88679245283 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77220833222 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3305059096 44.8134815571 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.5 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 4.34317383033 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217327774471 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105499003861 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770241251168 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138633845369 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072546358593 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.