i am writing this letter regarding the parking problrm for my cycle in our resident building.
I am sirisha that i am staying since last two years.Firstly,summer is the perfect weather to ride bycle.At the same time i am unable to go to gym to do my routine daily excersies because my office working hours are changed due to project.So that my gym trainer was advised to ride a bicyle which helps to burn our calories and also best cardiac excersise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
i am writing this letter regarding the pa...
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Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
i am writing this letter regarding the pa...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...resident building. I am sirisha that i am staying since last two years.Firstly...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
... that i am staying since last two years.Firstly,summer is the perfect weather to ride b...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , summer
... am staying since last two years.Firstly,summer is the perfect weather to ride bycle.At...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...er is the perfect weather to ride bycle.At the same time i am unable to go to gym ...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... weather to ride bycle.At the same time i am unable to go to gym to do my routine...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...orking hours are changed due to project.So that my gym trainer was advised to ride...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the best'.
Suggestion: also the best
...le which helps to burn our calories and also best cardiac excersise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 373.0 937.175257732 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 81.0 206.0 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6049382716 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.0 3.78020617076 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95647437681 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 60.0 127.690721649 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.740740740741 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 117.9 290.88556701 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6804123711 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 16.3608247423 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.0 44.8134815571 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.5 76.5299724578 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5 16.8248392259 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 4.34317383033 403% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0545409906301 0.216113520407 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683570970934 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560655825877 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683570970934 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560655825877 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 8.37731958763 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 8.62886597938 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 8.54432989691 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 8.15463917526 258% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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