A year ago, you became a member of your local film club. You have decided that you do not want to continue your membership for another year.
Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter
state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
give details about the benefits you have had from being a member of the club
explain why you have decided not to renew your membership
Dear Sir or Madam,
It has been a pleasure to be a part of your film club since last year. However, despite all the benefits I have received from it, I am willing to cancel my membership for the next year. Therefore, I am writing to you asking for your assistance in this matter.
Currently, I have a silver membership with an annual fee of $100. In the last 10 moths, I have been paying for it monthly with my credit card, so with the cancellation of my status, I would like its data to be deleted from your system. I am also ready to pay the rest of the money for the two months followed by one transaction, if it is possible.
I want to assure you that my decision is not based on any dissatisfaction; my experience with your club is pleasant. Some of your services, like price acting classes and free tickets to pre-premier films, I found very entertaining. Additionally, it was memorable to participate in The Hamlet last summer, where I performed on the stage for the first time.
So, the main reason for my request is because I am moving to another town in the near future. I applied for a job in Northfield and got approved. I wish I could continue visiting the film club, but, unfortunately, my new home is 35 kilometres away from here.
Thank you for the experience I have got, and I look forward to receiving your response regarding my request as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Olha Yevtushenko.
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| 2020-05-27 | Olha Yevtushenko | 92 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the near future. I applied for a job in Northfield and got approved. I wish I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5250965251 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82930189985 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3775556997 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7142857143 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326951678563 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108946871577 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712260452814 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188903723812 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891085163355 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.