You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Writs a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and service
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. Recently, we had an opportunity to visit your restaurant situated on Shahra-e-Faisal. We visited your branch on Monday dated 25th June, 2018. It was a very special occasion for our group.
Let me explain you in detail. As, it was our friend's birthday and I was given the task to choose dine-in place. While, doing research I found your restaurant and menu to be highly reliable and having wide range of options. One of the best things about your menu was, it catered everyone's needs, whether they are vegetarian, sea food or meat fan. Moreover, when we visited your restaurant, your staff was friendly and the ambience, which was created was perfect for the occasion. Furthermore, all of our friends were impressed beyond expectation with the quality and quantity of food. However, food was served a bit late but the wait was worth while and could be ignored, due to great quality and taste of food.
Furthermore, it is to mention that we were glad, that we got an opportunity to visit your restaurant and would like to give 5 on 5 overall for maintaining high standards. Hopefully, you would maintain these standards and act as a benchmark for other restaurants.
Your Sincerely,
Alan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. Recen...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2018'.
Suggestion: June 2018
...isited your branch on Monday dated 25th June, 2018. It was a very special occasion for our...
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Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: WORTH_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worthwhile'?
Suggestion: worthwhile
... was served a bit late but the wait was worth while and could be ignored, due to great qual...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r other restaurants. Your Sincerely, Alan
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Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...estaurants. Your Sincerely, Alan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86854460094 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71343632142 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652582159624 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4877041042 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0714285714 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296624016126 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101912939431 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377290575083 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200668815357 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323052982727 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.