Dear Sir/Madam,
We had a great time at your Lincoln Rd, branch yesterday evening. I am writing this letter to thank you and all your restaurant staff to make my our team's yesterday evening so special.
One of our team member was retiring from her services yesterday and we wanted to make this a memorable moment for her. We spoke with the event handler Mr. Keith yesterday morning to help us making this occasion a worth remembering. Given the short notice we not expecting the arrangements to be done so fast and so well.
We really loved the service provided by the waiting staff to the bartender all were very friendly and professional at the same time. We would definitely like to recommend your restaurant to our friends and families for any celebration. The quality of food was amazing and the kebab's were the best, like we never had one like that before.
Thank you again for accommodating us in such a short notice and make this farewell for all us worth remembering.
Your's Sincerely,
Ajam Shaikh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
... Mr. Keith yesterday morning to help us making this occasion a worth remembering. Give...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81355932203 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62682095391 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9519943603 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161326283518 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693226920897 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620960983786 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987850017413 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079892419199 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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