You and some friends had dinner in a restaurant a few Nights ago. the service at restaurant was terrible and food was bad . you and two of your friends had severe stomachaches the following day. The food was also overpriced.
Write to the manager of a restaurant. In your letter
Explain this problems
Give details that you think are Revelant
Ask manager to do something about the situation
Dear sir,
My friends and I had dinner at your restaurant on last Saturday. I am writing this letter to express complaining about the food and the service.
During the visit, me and my friends faced various problems when we had dinner that weekend night. Firstly, the behavior of service staff is too disparate and atrocious. Owning to this, one of waiter after splitting curry on my friend's lap and did not even care for apologize. Secondary, the served Mexican Continental cuisine smells odorless and seems cooked long time ago. Due to this me and my friends suffered from food poisoning and stomach-ache. Lastly, the washroom was filthy and in unhygienic condition.
However, the charged extra amount for meals beside the mentioned price in menu. Also, I think dessert was stale. Moreover, the waiters are not spotless which makes unconsciousness in mind. Now, which wisely affected the health and wastage of penury on unexpected illness.
I strong feel that your management will rectify all these problems as early as possible and took cautious steps to keep the trust and satisfaction of most customers. I expect you to refund or compensate the cost of mine meal. A copy of the bill enclosed here with this letter.
I look forward to hearing response from you.
Your sincerely
Tom Smith
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-25 | navjot jammu | 71 | view |
- Grandparents take care of children when their parents are out of work what are the advantages and possible disadvantages of this 74
- The chart shows that distribution of employed and unemployed people in Philippines in 1932 and in 1992 78
- You and some friends had dinner in a restaurant a few Nights ago the service at restaurant was terrible and food was bad you and two of your friends had severe stomachaches the following day The food was also overpriced Write to the manager of a restauran 71
- The bar chart shows the divorce rate into European countries from 2011 to 2015 67
- With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are not able to do the work which people use to perform.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this Trend?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from yo 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, My friends and I had a dinner at your re...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'had dinner'.
Suggestion: had dinner
Dear sir, My friends and I had a dinner at your restaurant on last Saturday. I ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'had dinner'.
Suggestion: had dinner
... friends faced various problems when we had a dinner that weekend night. Firstly, the behavi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...havior of service staff is too disparate and atrocious. Owning to this, one of wa...
^^
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... odorless and seems cooked long time ago . Due to this me and my friends suffered ...
^^
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...l that your management will rectify all this problems as early as possible and took ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he cost of mine meal. A copy of the bill enclosed here with this letter. I lo...
^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...re with this letter. I look forward to hear response from you. Your sincerely ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99086757991 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63719030926 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698630136986 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3160029621 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2941176471 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8823529412 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254830348282 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639497696247 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644585128809 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118749832222 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822103472416 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.