You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there.
Write a letter to a property agent. in your letter
- Introduce yourself and your family
- Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
- Give your preference for the location of the accommodation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request your assistance in getting a suitable property in Australia where my family and I will move in next month.
My name is Ayoub. We are not that big family as it consists only of my lovely wife and one infant, his name is Ezz. When we decided to immigrate, we could not have a better choice to ask your company assistance to advise us for the best accommodation to rent.
Although we are living in a small apartment in our city, we look forward to getting a large apartment in Australia. Therefore, I would request that you review the current available options of two bed rooms flat. The flat should be in the ground floor with a large garden where my kid can play with his peers. A quite space of balcony is enough for us to relax during the weekend.
The best location where I request you to search is in the city center near to the local transportation and hyper-markets. You may know that I will be looking for jobs once arriving Sydney, hence I will be moving around looking for any opportunity by the local transportation, and my wife won`t be having a driving licence to get our grocery.
Looking forward to receiving your feedback.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('space') instead of another adjective.
...n where my kid can play with his peers. A quite space of balcony is enough for us to relax du...
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Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtunity by the local transportation, and my wife won't be having a driving l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60454545455 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67724957545 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8330845766 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20656704272 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731851239542 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550076710512 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11608612269 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369780876711 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.