You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write to a letter to manager of the hotel for making the arragements. Let him know when you will be arriving and leaving , what kind of accommodation you would like and how much the weekend will cost. Also obtain about activities and places of interest near the hotel where you'll stay.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to give some information regarding my family vacation that will be held in your perfect Hotel Rixos.
As you check out of booking.com , we will arrive at your destination on 3rd of July and are going to leave on 10th of the same month.
As we are nuclear family that consist of just 4 people , we would like to stay in two big-family room in order to be comfortable during our holiday.
On the other hand , could you inform that how much should we pay money in terms of all-inclusive resort? İn addition to that I just wondered what is fee of a day of the hotel on weekends, if we stay with self-catering?
Finally , as we have never been in this side of the country , could you send to my email address a brochure showing the list of activities and historical buildings there?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your faithfully .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to give some in...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Rixos. As you check out of booking.com , we will arrive at your destination on 3...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ear family that consist of just 4 people , we would like to stay in two big-family...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uring our holiday. On the other hand , could you inform that how much should w...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... we stay with self-catering? Finally , as we have never been in this side of t...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e never been in this side of the country , could you send to my email address a br...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...aring from you soon. Your faithfully .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49693251534 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59101338725 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7610825338 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274468998992 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105505987216 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419308015286 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123866716062 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445310617551 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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