Dear Tom,
Hope you remember me, I am Rink, I paid a visit to your hotel last summer on a business trip. I am writing this letter to priorly inform you about my planned trip with my family as they always desperately wanted to visit a picturesque seaside hotel.
There are 7 people in the group. So, kindly do the arrangement appropriately, we will check in on august 10th and our check-out would be on August 17th which is to say we gonna stay there at least for a week to spend a good time. Kindly send the price details through mail on my personal mail id so that I can transfer you through internet banking. My mom and dad require a suite room and me and my wife along with our kids will stay in a deluxe room. Kindly, check for the availability on these given dates.
Moreover, as my kids are over 15 and 18 years old they require gaming arenas or places to visit with good sceneries and intense gaming activities if there are any it would be appreciable. I would request you that make every requirement satisfy and I will pay you the price for an all-inclusive package.
Waiting for your early reply, so, that we can start as planned. If there are any conspiracies do let me know we can re schedule the trip.
Yours faithfully,
shekar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eply, so, that we can start as planned. If there are any conspiracies do let me kn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4224137931 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50267395644 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5713439153 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206088326849 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667993634492 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599060610428 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11730106881 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583281540128 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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