You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements.
1. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving.
2. What type of rooms you would like.
3. Ask them how much the weekend will cost.
4. Also, enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to check the rooms availabilities at your hotel, as my family and I would like to spend sometimes at a seaside hotel. In fact we are planning to visit Jeddah next week on 21st of November until 24th of November and we are looking to stay near the coast.
Therefore, I would be extremely grateful if you would please send me the type of available rooms, as I prefer to have 2 master rooms with private bathrooms and a balcony with sea view.
I also was wondering about the total cost of these rooms per day and if the breakfast include in the package or not?. Moreover, I have heard that Jeddah city has a wonderful places to visit and activities to do, so, would you please send me a list of the top 10 places to visit and the most interesting activities to try.
Thanks in advance and I am looking for your great response.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to check the ro...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'spend'.
Suggestion: sometimes spend
...hotel, as my family and I would like to spend sometimes at a seaside hotel. In fact we are plan...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easide hotel. In fact we are planning to visit Jeddah next week on 21st of Novemb...
^^
Line 13, column 175, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
... heard that Jeddah city has a wonderful places to visit and activities to do, so, wou...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...laces to visit and activities to do, so, would you please send me a list of the t...
^^
Line 21, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your great response. Best regards Bilal
^^^^
Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at response. Best regards Bilal
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52409638554 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46582829665 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6275846004 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214085836766 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767064066226 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941214639351 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108202887472 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073080979028 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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