Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about a social gathering which will be organised by me in the area of Central park. A favour is required from your end to publish this meeting agenda in your newspaper.
Let me brief you about the agenda, main idea behind this meeting is to gather people from different nations, where we can all communicate and share our thoughts. I have planned this gathering to be held every first Sunday of the month. In every meeting all the members will be provided with either a tea or a coffee along with snacks. My motive to start such group, is to solve problems which are faced by people from different nationalities in a foreign land. Here, we can all sit together and address our issues and concerns to each other, and hopefully someone will have either faced the issue in past or can provide assistance of some kind. In every meeting we will have a cultural program which will be performed by local people to enlighten about their culture to everyone. The meeting will be concluded with the suggestions and any impending issues to be taken forward, all will be written down and an action plan will be in motion.
The First meeting will take place at Raddison blu Grand hall, located at central park. The date to remember is 7th of July and meeting will commence form 11:00 AM.
Yours Sincerely,
Gunjan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64462809917 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34218433749 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8244604454 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233961698044 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865531791525 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751462966563 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166887386917 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940146540124 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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