Dear Mr.Sharma,
I am writing this letter to ask for a time off for a recent course in Data Science which i have started and would like to complete it with your help. As you are aware that trend in analytic is changing rapidly therefore i want to be future ready which will help me and our company. The course duration is three months which is already completed but there is an exam scheduled to pass the course and i needed a week off time to clear and receive my certificate.
To compensate my unavailability, i would be delighted to work on weekends and extend some time from regular days to meet the gap. Along with this I will also provide initial training to our team in filed of data science and will create a self learning module to help everyone.
After receiving my certificate i can provide a deep insight to the data which we have collected over past several years which will help us to attract more customers. With the analysis at our disposal our company can target customers according to their specific needs which will increase our revenues. Even in my current role as a Team leader it will help me to devise new methods of work which will benefit my team and create transparency of data throughout the system.
Yours sincerely,
Gunjan Pratap
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sharma
Dear Mr.Sharma, I am writing this letter to ask for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... As you are aware that trend in analytic is changing rapidly therefore i want to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...analytic is changing rapidly therefore i want to be future ready which will help...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n exam scheduled to pass the course and i needed a week off time to clear and rec...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...te. To compensate my unavailability, i would be delighted to work on weekends ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lf learning module to help everyone. After receiving my certificate i can provide ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...yone. After receiving my certificate i can provide a deep insight to the data ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61674008811 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51914596102 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599118942731 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8542444416 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188687966516 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781763576083 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661500068286 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125946568032 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772542741447 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.