You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:-
- What activities you have planned
- When the first meeting takes place and where
Dear Sir,
I am Daljit Kaur, the president of the local Royal Club. Our club is organizing seminars in which people from different nationalities are invited to take part in the programme. It would be very thank full of yours if you could arrange a column mentioning about our event in your newspaper. This could make an awearness and support in form of participation by our local people.
We shall discuss various social issues in our meetings. Along with the culture exchanges, we shall talk over issues related environment problem, drug trafficking, women and child trafficking, domestic violence, political issues and so on. We have also planned to organize career counselling and blood donation camp that will run full week.
Our first meeting will help on 20th August, the venue- the Club Cabana with the programme thyme: ‘Global Culture and Traditional Culture’.
All the club members are working with a great energy to make this a memorable movement for all the participants attending this event. WIth the help of your article, published in the local newspaper could create an awareness amongst the local public about our activities.
Yours Sincerely,
Daljit Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tivities. Yours Sincerely, Daljit Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19895287958 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7141130986 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9856331193 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152282988003 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545500959081 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503683461032 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083534388213 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599976089799 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.