You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from one of your teachers. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter:
• Give details of the job & position you are applying for
• Explain why the reference is important
• Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr. Sharma,
Hope you and your family are doing well. I am Ravi Sharma, one of your past students, writing for your reference for a job I am going to apply to. I am hoping that you would write me a recommendation letter that my prospective employer is expecting.
I am delighted to inform you that I am applying for a position in Samsung India Pvt Ltd. This is a dream job for me and working for a reputable company like Samsung will enable me to gain valuable experiences and give wings to my career.
In the letter of reference, I would appreciate it if you could include information related to my trustworthiness, my enthusiasm, and my cross-cultural awareness while in college time. As the job is in UAE, they do not have the chance to face to face round interview and will base their decision largely on my letters of reference. I would need to have this letter in two weeks, so I can send it to them on a given time frame.
I would like to request you to give me a letter as early as possible. I will be indebted to you for the favor.
Yours sincerely,
Ravi Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t my prospective employer is expecting. I am delighted to inform you that I am a...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ospective employer is expecting. I am delighted to inform you that I am ap...
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Line 13, column 235, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to face'.
Suggestion: to face
... is in UAE, they do not have the chance to face to face round interview and will base their dec...
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Line 17, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... give me a letter as early as possible. I will be indebted to you for the favor. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46798029557 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76728933556 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56157635468 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6503403409 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371861871322 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139203672365 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735973041401 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224028277384 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101436208306 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.