Dear Sir,
My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I am a part-time student of your school which has recently organized a crash course in the evening on Thursdays and Fridays to gain extra skills in the software industry. The course does not cover the main topics of the software industry, since I was from the first batch. Therefore, I am writing this letter to share some feedback about the new crash course which has been organized by your prestigious school.
I am studying the advanced concepts of relational database software from your school. However, certain topics are required to add up in the course for students because most of the course parts have been outdated in the IT industry. Hence, it is a humble request for your to revise and reform the content in the crash course.
Furthermore, if you will consider setting up a meeting with some experienced industry professionals along with the teaching staff before inspecting and modifying the content of the new course. It will be fruitful for the next upcoming batches as well as for school which will provide an immense knowledge of databases that are used nowadays in the software industry.
I am hoping for a positive response to this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53351234598 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 210.0 16.3608247423 1284% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1026.0 76.5299724578 1341% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 210.0 16.8248392259 1248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 79.0 4.34317383033 1819% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25639942994 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25639942994 0.0766984524023 334% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136957335018 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427356300823 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.6 8.37731958763 1272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -133.21 70.7449484536 -188% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.0 7.45979381443 1126% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.51 7.59969072165 230% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.0 8.54432989691 1007% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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