You are a club secretary. An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club. Write a letter to thank him/her and say how club members enjoyed it. Include the following in your letter: (asked in Sep 2017 – India)– When and where did t

Dear Mr. Stark,

Hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health, I am writing to you in connection to show my gratitude and thank you for providing us your unmatched knowledge.

In the talk that happened on this Friday on 1st of March at Hotel Galaxy, your speech about how to manage time was really great. I got feedback from the club members, most of the people were so moved from the theory and appreciated your practical techniques. Later, this week they told me about the positive impact on their daily routine and it was life-changing learning for some. Based on the tremendous success of your session, I am getting more request for your lecture talk from those who were not able to attend the last session, moreover, some people are getting interested in further topics.

I request you to provide me a suitable timing and date schedule on which we can organize the next session, it will be according to your convenience for sure, I will arrange the tickets and accommodation accordingly. You have gained a number of admirers from your oratory skills, hope you would not disappoint them.

Looking for your prompt reply.

Your Sincerely,
ABC

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, moreover, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84729064039 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5569017597 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645320197044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1350440876 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167814240251 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670490899335 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427277931043 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092657073034 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416926927794 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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