You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
Explain your situation.
Describe your problems.
Tell him/her when you think you can move in.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Kamal,
As you know I have rented 25 Ismail Sedky street apartment from you for six months from 15th August. However, I am so sorry to inform you that my plan had some changes and I will not be able to move from your flat because illness.
During the summer I working in a very reputable company as a project manager. Last Monday at the end of my shift I slipped on a wet floor and my leg had been broken.
Nowadays, I am in my family house in Cairo and I cannot return until the plaster take off, I think this will be happen in the last week of October when come back, I will move to a new flat at 7 Ali Ismail street, Dokky.
I hope this not cause you any difficulties.
Your sincerely.
Ahmed shawky.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
...ow I have rented 25 Ismail Sedky street apartment from you for six months from 15th Augus...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...lat because illness. During the summer I working in a very reputable company as ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 577.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12142857143 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19241503221 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7965516309 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271134702949 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105146700603 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958262280401 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137229464604 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123026887196 0.0580467560999 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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