You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late.Write a letter to your landlordwhy you are writing to himwhy you cannot pay the rentwhen you will pay the rent.

Submitted by Primace on Sun, 07/07/2019 - 11:12

Dear Don Trumpft,

I am writing this letter while in a big financial dead hole, please pardon my late rent.

Last week, I found 2 hookers lying inside the apartment suite I a currently renting, I thought I can't let them die. So I dragged two ladies into my bed and went to work. When I came back from work, I found my watch and wallet were stolen. I called the police and the thieves are nowhere to be found.

So I paid 2 hookers $500 to sleep in their bathhouse for 2 nights, leaving me only $12 for the remainder of this month. This cost me almost everything, so I can't pay my rent on time. Please give me more time, I might able to chase down my money and return them to the hookers.

In time, I will wire you the money when I am back in India. If you don't mind, I am taking some of the furniture in your room back to my hometown. They look really beautiful and I can't go to sleep without them. If my sisters like them, you can marry them and our debt will clear.

Love you,

Vanlera Miskn

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...kers lying inside the apartment suite I a currently renting, I thought I cant let...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...uite I a currently renting, I thought I cant let them die. So I dragged two ladies i...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...h. This cost me almost everything, so I cant pay my rent on time. Please give me mor...
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Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e money when I am back in India. If you dont mind, I am taking some of the furniture...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...in India. If you dont mind, I am taking some of the furniture in your room back to my homet...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...etown. They look really beautiful and I cant go to sleep without them. If my sisters...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.08585858586 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10429158075 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6558931256 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.2307692308 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187940315621 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671629834373 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758921222116 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09382979649 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808259397491 0.0580467560999 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.85 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.82 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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