you are going abroad to study and want to get part time job over there. write a letter to your friend and
give details of your study plan
why do you want to do job
suggest how he can help you with job
Dear Jimmy,
I hope you’r doing well in Australia. The day of my departure has come closer, I’m excited though. I need your help in seeking part-time job before I land in Australia.
It’s a one year language course, and classes will be held three days every week. During the course, participants will also visit local community areas to gain an insight of how natives speak the functional language in different sectors of the society. I’m immensely excited to attend the classes as well as community gatherings.
However, I’m also looking forward to be able to grab a part-time job opportunity during the course since it would aid me to bear the living expenses. Besides financial support, it’d allow me to achieve Australian work experience which will be of great value.
I was wondering if you could arrange the employment for me since you’ve been living there for a long time and developed contacts with the local community, too. Before my arrival, could you drop my CV to potential employers in Sydney downtown? I would Email you my CV if you wouldn't mind in doing so.
I look forward to having your response.
See you soon, Love.
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 40, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to being'.
Suggestion: to being
... However, I'm also looking forward to be able to grab a part-time job opportunit...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...owntown? I would Email you my CV if you wouldnt mind in doing so. I look forward to h...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67457505014 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1342265992 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3076923077 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205906630554 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784350598233 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724230966912 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104048770906 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778082864735 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.