Dear Jenny,
It has been a while since we have been in touch. I finally decided to put the pen to paper and write to you about my studies.
On one hand, I am delighted to inform you that Harvard University has offered me an admission to their prestigious Business Management course. on the other, I must tell you that I only managed to secure a part scholarship for the tuition fee.
My family has offered to extend their support for the remaining tuition fee. However, considering the currency conversion rate in India and the USA, I plan to take on some part-time job to ease the burden on my family.
Performing well in my course is of paramount importance to me, after all I worked really hard to obtain a seat at Harvard.
I plan to spend all my time during the weekdays on studying hard and use the Sundays to complete the assignments. According to schedule Saturdays seem to be relatively free for most students. I plan to take on some job on Saturdays.
During your trip to India you had mentioned about how difficult it was for the employees in your company to find baby sitters, especially new mothers who return to their jobs after having a baby. I am good with children and love their innocence, curiosity, and playfulness. What better way to make money doing something that you enjoy. It would be great if you could check with your colleagues or post a notice on your group mailers about my availability to baby sit during the weekends.
I look forward to all the good times that we can have when I come to Boston. Cannot wait to catch up with you!!
Love,
Rajie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...prestigious Business Management course. on the other, I must tell you that I only ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, really, so, well, while, after all, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 26.3917525773 197% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54861111111 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55162741581 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3792954719 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.875 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259192671083 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775303520337 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552751907977 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104520582363 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059902662353 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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