You are going to arrange a celebration. You want to invite a singer. Write a letter to him.
tell him about the event
invite him to perform at the event
explain why you want him to perform
Dear Mr Amitav
I am Ishaan resident of the same colony as yours. My family and I are your fans. The reason I am writing to you is that we are going to have a party at our house next week. My mother and my father are the reason for this party.
The purpose of this party is to express our gratitude to our parents for their hard work, my brother and I want to give them a house, a car and a grand party on their 50th anniversary. So we would like to invite you to our party next week and ask you to play your songs live for our parents. This party is very important to us, that is why it is important for us to hear your best song, live with a guitar and we would like to ask you to do the same. We will be happy if you visit our party and fulfil our request.
If you need any special arrangements for your performance please feel free to ask. We will be happy to make it for you. Your performance will make the day more memorable.
I look forward to receiving a prompt reply!
Your sincerely!
Ishaan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Amitav I am Ishaan resident of the same colony ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Mr Amitav I am Ishaan resident of the same colony a...
^
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...the same colony as yours. My family and I are your fans. The reason I am writing ...
^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... family and I are your fans. The reason I am writing to you is that we are going ...
^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ur fans. The reason I am writing to you is that we are going to have a party at ou...
^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...nts for their hard work, my brother and I want to give them a house, a car and a ...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e will make the day more memorable. I look forward to receiving a prompt repl...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0495049505 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14225487636 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8078459151 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142341663943 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579666326138 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527162383038 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794746011681 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05242244567 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.07 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.