You are going to have a business trip and arrange your friend to look after your children. Write a letter to the friend, tn your letter, you should:
• tell him/her which kind of food your children tike and dislike
• tell him/her which kind of activities your children can attend
• tell him/her the time you will pick up your children
Dear Thomas,
Hope you and your family are doing well.First of all sorry for not being in touch,due to,over busy schedule. As you know it happens when you are mother of a young child.
Actually I needed a favour from your side, as I have to move out of the city for 2-3 days in context of a business meet and I want you to look after Kiara. I have made a list of her favourite food and had put it in first drawer of chest. she needs milk twice day but is allergic to high protein diet.
For passing your time you both can have an active participation in the voluantree work in the local society hub, even Kiara(she) enjoys it very much.Oh i forget to mention that she has also been enrolled in the Dance classes, about which you have to make her ready in the morning.
after getting back to London I will pick her up on Thursday evening.I cannot trust anyone else than you to look after her as you guys are both compatible with each other.
Seen you soon.
Yours Lovingly,
Veronica.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...Hope you and your family are doing well.First of all sorry for not being in touch,due...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , due
...irst of all sorry for not being in touch,due to,over busy schedule. As you know it h...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , over
... all sorry for not being in touch,due to,over busy schedule. As you know it happens w...
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Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing in touch,due to,over busy schedule. As you know it happens when you are mother...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...nd had put it in first drawer of chest. she needs milk twice day but is allergic to...
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Line 6, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Oh
... hub, even Kiarashe enjoys it very much.Oh i forget to mention that she has also b...
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Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...b, even Kiarashe enjoys it very much.Oh i forget to mention that she has also bee...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...to make her ready in the morning. after getting back to London I will pick her ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to make her ready in the morning. after getting back to London I will pick her ...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... I will pick her up on Thursday evening.I cannot trust anyone else than you to lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, look, so, well, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35294117647 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16615168052 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679144385027 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.779736694 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29274598693 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113059622177 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538159525215 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155011715748 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134567117097 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.