In the last decade, there has been an increase in the number and variety of online courses available to adults. While welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, other students see these courses as a poor substitute for classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?
education is that weapon which can make or mar the fortune of a society and with the invasion of technology the mode of acquiring it is changing. these days variety of the courses are available to for everyone on internet,to which some masses are supporting while others says these are not as much efficient as the classroom studies. This essay is going to stand against and for the argument.
To begin with the disadvantages of these online available courses, the first risk associated with them is of their authorisation. some reputed companies do not consider these courses valid and hence when the students who had taken these courses find themselves in a devastating situation. some fake sites may also play with the time and money of a mediocre one. However,the benefits, these courses have served to the society can not be neglected.
The prime benefit of the digital education is that it provides the flexibility to the enrolling person, owing to the fact, that they can be pursued anytime and anywhere. For instance, a survey conducted by online tutors (an online course providing portal) revealed that 67% of their students are housewives as they can choose as per their will.
Adding more to this,they offers a liberty to the subscriber to select a skill which appeals them. As, even a Science student can choose the online course related to some foreign language or concerned with some kind of art. As a result of which these people would become more potent candidates for the hiring firms due the extra set of skills they have.
To conclude, these courses have a constantly nagging question of thier genuinty with them but benefit the more in terms of providing space in time and personal choice of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, may, so, while, for instance, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9387755102 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5807788107 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9285710598 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211109778589 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730805905262 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071009843454 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115956540697 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431359345234 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.