You are going to have repair work at your house. You live next to a restaurant and want to inform the restaurant manager about it.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter
- Give information about the repair work
- Say what problem this may cause the restaurant
- Suggest some ideas to deal with the problems
Dear Sir,
I am write this letter to inform you I am doing repair work in my house which is on the right side of your restaurant kitchen and the noise will be laud.
I am repair my house for water leek and they will break the wall and make new one. The work is starting on Monday and finish on by Thursday next week. The worker will work from 9am to 5m.
On Monday, they start taking wall down so they will make lost of noise and maybe some dust come near your kitchen. We put net to keep dust but you know sometimes some dust may come. By Monday night all dust will be taken away, so from Tuesday it will be better.
Your kitchen staff is always keep door and window open, but for Monday please close it so no dust will come when you making food in restaurant. Also, please to a board for your customer that there is noise problem at the place on Moday.
Thank you for understand my problem.
Regards,
Remu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am write this letter to inform you I a...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
Dear Sir, I am write this letter to inform you I am doing re...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'know'.
Suggestion: sometimes know
...itchen. We put net to keep dust but you know sometimes some dust may come. By Monday night all...
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Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u for understand my problem. Regards, Remu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16853932584 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.82859774856 2.54303337028 72% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8061092385 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205652164359 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776438941422 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828195533732 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134891989142 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103888007058 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.81 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.