You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter
• expressing your interest in the role
• requesting more information about it
• explaining what experience you have
Dear Mr. Mike,
I am writing to inform you about the weeks digital marketing programme held in the UK. Recently, I came know the head of training course is encouraging course participants to be the social event entrepreneur. I believe it is going to be a talent hunting movement.
Besides, I would like to nominate me for this role as I have always waiting for this opportunity to reveal my extraordinary talent in front of senior most people in our organization. Therefore, it gives me more opportunity and benefits. I would like to know more about this role. Thus, I will be able to exercise me accordingly. Also, I would like to bring to your note here, that I have organized many social events such as Birthday party, Farewell to our Head of Finance last month, Fresher welcome event etc. Hence, I am a seasoned person for this role.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Sayu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, hence, look, so, therefore, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74375 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76557379896 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9254942386 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300885493014 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967372682382 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814007802977 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168035931641 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111091020455 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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