You are going on a short training course at a college. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:
explain your situation.
describe the accommodation you require.
say when you will need it.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am doomed to my current living conditions in the hostel. I have no major concerns with my room per se however, my housemate has made my life miserable to continue living here. I hope you will consider my request genuine.
Let me first explain my situation. It all started when my new housemate moved in to stay with me here. Prior to that everything was cordial between me and my old roommate. My current roommate is up all night and parties with intolerably loud music. I have tried to sort things out by communicating with her on many occasions, but sadly all efforts in vain. Now it is impossible for me to sleep properly hence affecting studies and work by lowering my concentration levels.
Would you kindly transfer me or my roommate to a different accommodation? I would prefer to live in with a more considerate and quieter person. As long as the room is peaceful to study and work, I don't mind with whom I share.
Thank you for consideration.
Your Faithfully,
Diana
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am d...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...life miserable to continue living here. I hope you will consider my request genui...
^
Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'different accommodation'.
Suggestion: different accommodation
...ou kindly transfer me or my roommate to a different accommodation? I would prefer to live in with a more ...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e room is peaceful to study and work, I dont mind with whom I share. Thank you f...
^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for consideration. Your Faithfully, Diana
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62903225806 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79830833558 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0313370249 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12936154534 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594133343968 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684969782089 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109247540408 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609403023994 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.