You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to this friend in your letter
In your letter
• Introduce Yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring
Dear Martin,
Hello! I hope things are fine with you. My name is Kiara. I am writing this letter to let you know I am coming Toronto next month to spend holiday week there.
First of all, let me remind you I am Siara's cousin and we have already met each other during your visit to India. We attended a friend's wedding and had enjoyed alot there. After then, we took you to a long drive and places of excursion you had never been before. Hope now you recognize me.
Since I work in a reputed organization where I can hardly take a break for lunch due to hectic schedule, I decided to make a trip so that I can relax and unwind away from tiresome work.
As you grew up in Canada, no one can guide me better than you about your hometown. After all I am inclined towards adventurous places, could you please advice me some of the popular sites according to my taste? Not only this, I am coming there for the first time therefore, I would like you to tell me what else is popular in your country and other things that I should do there as a sightseer. Last but not the least, kindly provide me a list of all the necessary things that I should carry along with me during my journey.
Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
With regards,
Sabrina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Martin, Hello! I hope things are fine with you. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...next month to spend holiday week there. First of all, let me remind you I am Sia...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...been before. Hope now you recognize me. Since I work in a reputed organization w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lax and unwind away from tiresome work. As you grew up in Canada, no one can gui...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rous places, could you please advice me some of the popular sites according to my taste? No...
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Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur earliest reply would be appreciated. With regards, Sabrina
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, therefore, after all, mind you, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32911392405 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23001269348 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3712450287 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2857142857 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287340966107 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887660155661 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678215492808 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141687170156 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671303495583 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.