Dear Neha,
Hope you have best spirits with radiant health and wealth. Firstly, Let me introduce myself. I am Sarah Musharaf, cousin sister of Sameera. Hoping that you can recognize me. I am writing this letter just because of my Dubai visa has been approved in couple of days ago, I am coming Dubai on dated 25-March-2019. However, I would like to inform you that isit it my first visit of Dubai. So, I have no idea about Dubai country. That's why I am little about worried.
I would like to inform you that it my final job interview visit. Basically I need your help. You are staying in Dubai after along time so definitely you have idea about each and every thing related to rent, hotel accommodation, transports etc. Could you please favor me? Kindly book the hotel room only for 20 days with in reasonable range because I have very limited amount of saving.
Furthermore, it is possible that can you pick me at airport around 11:00 AM? I am too much nervous that's why i insist you again and again. Hopefully you can understand. Moreover, I will manage further things in the form of food, transportation etc.
If you want to know any information regarding my visit. You can contact me on my mobile number 001234567890.
Waiting for your urgent response.
Yous truly,
Sarah Musharaf.
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he form of food, transportation etc. If you want to know any information regard...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56326536514 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9220706776 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.4285714286 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8571428571 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09523809524 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237014553982 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710010162724 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375544215874 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132445628292 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286198140864 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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