Dear James,
Hope, you are well with the best spirits. Yesterday I received your letter. I was really happy to know that, after the end of second semistor we are still friends and you want valuable advice to me regarding your study and job.
I would like to mention here, I know your current financial position.Even I gainsaying that, you are supporting your family and your studies also with the help of tuition. I know everything about you because we have spent plethora of time together. However, I love your hardworking behaviour and your skills. Even I feel proud, you are my friend.
Furthermore, according to my opinion, I will suggest you if you have good opportunity regarding any sort of job. So, try to avail it. Because it will resolve your immense issue and you will easily get admission in next semester as well as you can also support your family.
Some of the good websites and newspapers can help you for job searching. If you want my help so, I will always try to support you.
Wishing you best of luck!
Yours friend
Aliza.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, regarding, second, so, still, well, i feel, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74731182796 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4815948702 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4866208404 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9230769231 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260135201468 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10574364646 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506770059114 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161082121027 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514975949508 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.