You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there.Write a letter to the tourist information office.In your letter:explain what you needsay when you plan to be thereask for information about pri

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the availability of a vacation home in Singapore. My girlfriend and I am going to spend our upcoming Easter holiday there.

We are looking for a cosy one-bedroom flat that is fully furnished and has its own kitchen. Moreover, we would prefer the place to be close to either a bus stop or a train station. The reason for that is we have done our research and found out that it is very convenient to get around by public transportation.

If nothing changes, we will touch down in Singapore on April 12 around noon and leave for Vietnam on the following Tuesday, April 16. Therefore, in total, we will need the place to be booked for four nights.

I would be grateful if you can provide me with a few options that satisfy our budget of 150 SGD per night. However, I am totally fine with paying a little more if the place is close to the central area. Also, it would be the most convenience for us if you can include an airport pick-up service to take us to the apartment.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Steven Jackson

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53713291824 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3696597934 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181624523556 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607541235043 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521191635199 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986440239715 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542624164464 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.