Dear John
I'm writing this letter to let you know that I will be throwing a party in London on new year's eve by 8:00 pm.
The party will make up for my lack of socializing and also to ease stress. This year has been very busy for me due to my work schedule. I work 80 hours per week and to be honest with you I don't have any spare time to socialize as much.
I'd love to make "Afang Soup" for the guests at my party and will be grateful if you fill me in on the recipe to prepare this great dish because the expectations are high and majority of friends coming love very tasty dishes including yourself.
I'm also inviting you for this party I'm throwing. It's been ages since we saw, I remember the last time we were together was in Paris when we attended a carnival together with family and friends. The trip was fun especially the fact that uncle Mike let us use his private jet for a round trip and ofcourse we have good memories of this particular journey.
I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best. Richard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in London on new years eve by 8:00 pm. The party will make up for my lack of so...
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...od memories of this particular journey. I hope to hear from you soon. ...
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... All the best. Richard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19696969697 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23303727325 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.3646339655 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182961079891 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674232039506 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529307793096 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756233119265 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572627476559 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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