Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going great. I am writing this letter to apologize for my absence at the recent event held by the company. The event which was entitled 'Youths and Drug Abuse' took place on 4th February 2023, This event is an eye opener for the youths in the state because of the recent news about youths involved in drug use.
However, this event was a very important one because it outlined the dangers youths faced due to drug abuse. Also, instances were given so that these youths can understand what will happen to them. They will have themselves to blame if they decide to use drugs. Furthermore, since youths use drugs a lot recently, holding this event was a necessity.
So, the reason I missed this great event was because I received a call this morning that I lost my uncle. Also, I had to take his corpse to the mortuary given that I am the only family he has.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Adam.
- Immigration has a major impact on the society What are the main reasons for immigration To what consequences can it lead 61
- some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centres while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution discuss both sides and give your opinion I need to score 7 73
- some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centres while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution discuss both sides and give your opinion I need to score 7 73
- In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them Sometimes the government has to pay for this care Who do you think should pay for this care the government or the family 56
- In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes However some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4161849711 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15091047021 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1275424197 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305352753503 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107179336421 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851601606577 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159084136441 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938223164783 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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