Dear Joey,
I hope you are prospering and in the best of your spirits. I would like to genuinely like to thank you, for being my saviour and taking out time in your busiest days. I understand how life is tough for a doctor and it is very generous of you to help me settle down in the unknown city.
I have received my transfer letter day before yesterday and will be reaching London on the 1st of August. It would be better if I get accommodation 2-3 days before as documentation and procedure will take a few days. My office is on St. James street. So it would be convenient for me if the place is near 3-5 km from this location. Also, I suffer from acoustic migraine, it is better if there is no construction site near 300 metres. Last, I am looking for a flat, and I'm ready to share it with another student.
Once again, Thanks for making this easier for me. I hope I can return this favour one day.
Yours Lovingly,
Amy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lp me settle down in the unknown city. I have received my transfer letter day be...
^
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...res. Last, I am looking for a flat, and Im ready to share it with another student....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23595505618 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42985159327 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657303370787 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1580299286 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139445871256 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050901524752 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488643893328 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896306461083 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752157364183 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.