You are going to your friends country to study and need help to secure a job while you are schooling, write a letter to her for assistance.
Dear Maggie,
How have you been? It's been a long time since we last saw and I am happy to write to you. I am actually coming to Canada to do my Masters degree and would need your help.
To start with, I am coming to Toronto for my post-graduate studies in Information Technology, as you already know I did Business and Information Technology as my first degree. I have just been offered an admission and would be resuming by October 25th, 2019.
However, I need a part-time job to support myself while in school. You know I lost my parents recently, and as an only child, I have no one else to help me financially. I was able to save about enough for my tuition and books but will need more money to pay for accommodation , feeding and transportation.
In other words, I need your help in securing a job before I resume. I intended coming a month earlier. Kindly help find a job at you current place of employment if possible or help me tell your contacts about my intentions. I will greatly appreciate it if you can help me as you live in Toronto and know much about the job market
I hope to hear from you soon.
Warm regards,
Lizzy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s been a long time since we last saw and I am happy to write to you. I am actuall...
^^
Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...need more money to pay for accommodation , feeding and transportation. In other...
^^
Line 9, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ronto and know much about the job market I hope to hear from you soon. Warm re...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, so, while, you know, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41121495327 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63115255434 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9814377199 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6153846154 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322131666529 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104679539805 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734858987203 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168976700846 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722177525407 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.