Dear all,
I hope you all are doing well and thank you for the poster cards and those gifts for visiting. I am so thankful that teams took over my job while I was in the hospital.
As you all know, I have been living in the hospital because I was knockdown by a car that cause my leg to break. Doctors diagnose that my leg was badly injured and suggested that I need bed rest for one to two weeks, also has physical therapy when my condition improves. It is expected to take three months to recuperate.
I only pass the time by painting when I was in bed, so I am glad to receive a sketchbook from Anne. At the same time, I am glad that someone appreciates and buys the picture which I uploaded to social software that will maintain my income while in hospital.
I will join in working projects as soon as possible and looking forward to seeing you all soon.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this 61
- The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use To what extent do 61
- friend has asked you to babysit on Saturday and wants to know how much you charge per hour for this Unfortunately you already have a commitment this weekend and cannot help However you free the following weekend Write a letter to your friend explaini 70
- You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your tutor In your letter1 Describe the situation2 Explain why you cannot continue at this time3 Say what action 56
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31116591557 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6958416377 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2222222222 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151645464547 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562842938263 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718204605325 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950877935801 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683354608967 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.