Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter to request reserve information about your hotel which my family and I are planning to stay at your hotel two week later for 3 days that we will check in on 5 August and check out on 8 August.
We have 3 children and 5 adults so we would like to reserve a no smoking room for two family rooms while we will appreciate reserving two double bedrooms and two twin bedrooms if family rooms are not available. If possible, could you also provide these room type prices on the weekend?
In addition, we want to take a rest in the hotel and planned to visit a theme park with children. Therefore, would you please suggest any activities will provide by the hotel, such as fitness room, water sport and any extra fee need to pay, also the nearby theme park? I would be highly obliged if you could provide these details at your earliest.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... are planning to stay at your hotel two week later for 3 days that we will check in ...
^^^^
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om you. Yours faithfully, Chris Wong
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46590909091 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30227945795 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0338106633 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33443631935 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133317104656 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057044928636 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178594819362 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508710922601 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.